I’ve just gotten some amazing feedback from my team. Needless to say, we don’t all agree. Surprise!
It seems I’ve made too many assumptions about my reader’s knowledge of the NiS universe. While we “work” through the conversations, I wanted to let you know that we’re alive and kicking. I’m still shooting for the first of next week to release the chapter. That way I might get Serena off my back! She sent me this nice note (indicating I found EXACTLY the right place to cut chapter 12 off – something I worried about for over a month):
You’ve killing me here! I stop month-end paperwork at the office to read Chp12 and you leave me hanging THERE? Evil! Evil! Bad mean nasty cruel writer!*sigh*OK. It’s out of my system now. I’ll re-read 1-12 and wait quietly for 13.Is it there yet?Is it there yet?Is it there yet?Is it there yet?How bout now?Now?Now?Now?Now?
(You realize I can do this all day……)
Gotta love feedback! Love ya Serena!
A word of warning. Chapter 14 is still very much in flux. I know what I need to say and what I want to say. I’m meeting every day with Rebbecca and Luis to iron things out. We’re getting there. After all, this story may be about them, but I’m still the writer! At least they let me think so. Nice of them.